#(spw) Vision

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runic steeple
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At first the lake was tar
and misted with its fogged up liquid fingers like
black sheep wool
evil and twisted obscuring

then it blinked its way through salted sadness
covered the pool with holy ink
lashed its doubts
and crystal cleared the collagen

as the reports flooded into the mind to
clear the vision at this station
the train of time is to depart
take up the mantle of clear judgement
preach in the streets of greater art

There was no more avoidance
sometimes the prophetic is just a clear cut communication
between the lenses and the receptor
the pools (clear as crystal)
the mind refreshed again
It was the beginning of clairvoyance.

lament glade
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You and Light make the most perplexing poems here.

olive oysterBOT
runic steeple
cunning nacelle
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Complex poem, love it that way tho. You used wide vocabulary and as if a story you tell a wonderful one

olive oysterBOT
timber estuary
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Outstanding poem, the depth is something I admire and not many can write this way, a lot of people don’t look into it the way you’ve created it
9/10 I this is definitely one of my favorites 👌🏻

limber prairie
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Wow this is beautifully complex yet simple piece the imagery used with the lake being tar and then moving into a train station which changes the vision. Beautiful work like usual spooky

runic steeple
runic steeple