In thine grace,

[acoustic veldt]

Seventy-five days;

My heart,
Forged for you,
Assembled with you in mind,
Carved to fit thine,
Palpitating synchronously,
Aligned paths to pursue,

Pulsating for thee,
Constricted with you,
Entwined with yours,
Molded cast for you,

Mine sweetheart,
My heart yearns,
For thine,
Craves to give ear to the pulse,
The hymne of our romance,

Whil thine is a farness,
Mine longing is adrent pining,
inasmuch as We'll sound the last all clear,
Mindful that I be in thine embrace,
For the remaining of my grace,

[plain lynx]

Save

[acoustic veldt]

Take your time, this time I didn't use that many obscure terms.

[plain lynx]

I don't know what to say, its just great and interesting in my opinion. I believe I got interesting ideas from your poem,

The idea of first stanza is just so good, I believe.

[acoustic veldt]

Well, I am glad you liked the poem, I appreciate your comment, if you need any help, feel free to ask me. Thank you again.

[plain lynx]

I wonder I found a word, but I couldn't translate it with translator on deepL
Would you like to help me if I would provide you with definition of tgat word?

[acoustic veldt]

Sure, what is the word? I can try helping you with that.

[plain lynx]

Okay

Its an adjective, that is synonym for beatiful, but its usually used for a lady. Also definition I found on internet is:
Gracefully beatiful, subtle

In our language its:
"Spanilá"
I find this word beatiful

[acoustic veldt]

Perhaps m'lady or fair lady

I am not familiar with Czechian. Fair and -m'lady could have meant beautiful

[plain lynx]

Okay, thank you anyway

[acoustic veldt]

English might lack at times for translation, which sucks, sometimes you could make a combination, of two different English syonynms, that might help you out.

If I could do anything else for you, feel free to let me know.

[plain lynx]

Every languages has it's speacialities. They usually catch me offguard.

Thank you for your help, sir

[acoustic veldt]

That is true, each language has unique qualities. Thank you for asking! I appreciate it.

[plain lynx]

Yeah, that when the translation's job starts to become hard

[visual haven]

Your poetry skills are incandescent, and immensely magnificent. You're quite an inspiration for me. Danke for this wonderful peace! Splendid!

[acoustic veldt]

I am glad you are enjoying it! It means a lot hearing that from you, you picked some German words up?

[visual haven]

Just a try! Isn't it good to learn a new language?

[acoustic veldt]

Not meant as criticism, I was just curious, it is beneficial to enlarge your language abilities.