#(spw) Diversionary

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tacit mortar
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A soft voice softened even more
reaching out to touch the forearm gracefully
with fingers audible and visibly warm
Yet distracting the directions underscored
teaching again about true yearning love and boring charms to face it truly
Bubbly and lively was the swarm

Alas, the compass went into the pirouette,
spinning soulfully and bitterly
origami heart crumpled up
Trampled underfoot in a dark alley
it is better to remember the good
and to let the dark mind forget

There was a delayed recovery
and a harvest spoilt
durum and buck
and apples mark the land
cerise swirled under hand
There, cursed luck
And the failures of the graceless

The flat cardioid laid out
on a large stone table
Smoldered and smoked softly before
it turned into a puff of grey

As hands dragged through hair quickly
rubbed eyes and
marked thoughts
quite clearly.

tacit mortar
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(spw) Diversionary

sonic carbon
# tacit mortar A soft voice softened even more reaching out to touch the forearm gracefully wit...

This feels like the state of dreaming where you are not fully awake and not sleeping. The first stanza feels like a loved one is trying to wake u up but you dont respond and on the 2nd stanza it turns into a nightmare.
And lastly the last 2 are talking about the brain fog after waking up.
Really nice stuff even tho Im 90% sure Im wrong with ny interpratation. But I kinda think the second to last stanza can be wordes better.