V for Various talents
A for Amazing balance
L for Lust for life
E for Enthusiastic day and night
R for Really curious
I for Intuition assuring us
And another E for Ear
So there’s love poems you can hear
#a Poem for my girlfriend
ivory holly
faint badger
Maybe try more adverbs… like “V is for Vivaciously talented,” or “R is for the Ravenously curious way you live.” Additionally, try and paint a picture with your descriptions - like “E is for the Enthusiastic way you greet the day,” - instead of being quite so matter-of-fact (like you were with “really curious” and “various talents.” Hope this helps. DM me if you want me take another look at any changes because I’m bad at checking back.
vagrant adderBOT
Maybe try more adverbs… like “V is for Vivaciously talented,” or “R is for the R...
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