golden cities

[olive lava]

I like this. It is pretty awesome. Very cool poem but you should get rid of waddle.

Personally I think waddle is not that good.

[humble mantle]

I think the flow could improve a bit, and how at times it can be repetitive. One last thing could be that the idea is a bit confusing, not sure what you are writing for

[primal cove]

Btw I dmed you

[hushed pebble]

I have to ask you to also post this in sensetive poetry

[humble mantle]

Hey! Mind helping me with smth?

[hushed pebble]

Sure, whats'up?

[humble mantle]

https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1206012965590139020

That lol

Also love the pfp

[outer oyster]

Wonderful! @humble mantle has just pregressed to level 5!

[hushed pebble]

Tyty ^^ (I took that pic btw)