#routine

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limpid finch
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Dull brown desk
Bright white paper
Fighting the rest
Unable to savor

Yellow lights harm
The squinted eye
As gold bills charm
The endless sky

sharp tide
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Do you need help making it longer or improving it?

drowsy turtle
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I like it, short and concise

drowsy turtle
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I gave it some thought and couldn't think of any way to change it. You could add some punctuation, it helps control the way a reader's inner dialogue flows.

limpid finch