#(ctb) Water or Light
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Firstly, and obviously I will comment on the striking typography. Well done. Good spacing as well.
Secondly, the sincere voice in the poem is coming through well.
I absolutely adore the final line
"Under the mercy of the sun"
Many other subtle things of the poem, the emphasis on it
You should be proud of this poem✨
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wow it's good
love the last line "under the mercy of the sun" and I really need to know how you get your pens to look so good, the presentation and typography, I need to know!!!
Glad u liked it ^^
I can share a few tricks sometime on a vc if u want me to
Just dm me cuz I'll forget 😅
Sure pls do!!! But like maybe not rn, I've got studies piled up. Too much on my plate