#(ctb) Water or Light

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steep wyvern
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still a work in progress but any thoughts will be appreciated

ashen cape
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Firstly, and obviously I will comment on the striking typography. Well done. Good spacing as well.
Secondly, the sincere voice in the poem is coming through well.

I absolutely adore the final line
"Under the mercy of the sun"

Many other subtle things of the poem, the emphasis on it

You should be proud of this poem✨

cosmic flume
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saving

robust pagoda
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wow it's good

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love the last line "under the mercy of the sun" and I really need to know how you get your pens to look so good, the presentation and typography, I need to know!!!

steep wyvern
robust pagoda
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Sure pls do!!! But like maybe not rn, I've got studies piled up. Too much on my plate