#Hollow - By Tuesday
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Mhm gotta cut the sentence sometimes to make it rhyme ✨️
Relatable
ew rhyme
hehehe
i’m in awe at the tone set by the first verse: these ‘other’ people who are too vague to fully understand, matched with the motif of meaningless repetition “and then, then we know. Yes, we do” gives this poem a frantic pace to understand them, yet seems to portray the idea that there will be no understanding of Them, and the only is solace accepting that. very cool poem, these unseen people writing aware somewhere i pictured as politicians, deciding our fate
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