Death of me

[fossil pewter]

@full glacier do you mind if I rephrase your poetry in my own style ?

[full glacier]

Ofcourse not!

[fossil pewter]

Thank you!

[fossil pewter]

Nay! I say to every other sensation of the heart
Except the ones, thee makes, I, feel on this wretched Earth
Stark it is I yell, those fragments of time with thee
A rather strange bliss, courses on a new path to see

Thou are a rose with thorns, I grasp with all mine strength
It hurts, too much to bear for mine weak palpitant segment
Yet, like a moth to a flame, I burn under thine cursed scripts
Thou the Earth, the moon mine pain and our love the Lunar Eclipse

A fragile humming bird, said the mirror to me
It warned me against thee, a devil in hide
Oh! This silly me! Running back to you endlessly
Dear Lord! Forgive me! For I shall sin! Until mine death carelessly!

@full glacier thank you for the idea!

[full glacier]

oh my god- my poem seems so silly compared to yours, you made it sound so romantic and beautiful

[fossil pewter]

Nah nah!

[fossil pewter]

It's just a style difference

[full glacier]

you call it style difference, I call it skill difference

[fossil pewter]

I didn't mean to disrespect your efforts in any way if I did. Sowwy

[full glacier]

you did not disrespect it, you made a whole different perspective. I loved it a lot

[fossil pewter]

[oblique prawn]

what an interesting interpretation! if you don’t mind me asking, who are your inspirations for a writing style like this? i’m getting a Wordsworth type vibe?

[fossil pewter]

Everyone says that-

I read TS Eliot, Keats

And ofcourse Wordsworth

They my fav

[oblique prawn]

nice nice 😎👍 they do have a pretty distinct style (esp in the 21 century haha) so i was just wondering. nice imagery w the hummingbird!