we truly never met.....??

[primal hornet]

<@&1145760802666717234> <@&1144090752457113794> @fallow hazel @reef gust @primal eagle

@tribal dagger

[bleak loom]

The meeting is divinely alligned for a purpose that awakens. 🪞
Great work. This is the most resonative poem I have read.

[primal hornet]

@bleak loom thank you broo,nd I'm glad that you liked my poem ✨🌙👍

[bleak loom]

you are wellcome.

[fallow hazel]

Your verses unfold a cosmic dance, A celestial connection, a poetic trance.

In the quiet of night, thoughts take flight, Two timelines apart, yet our souls alight.

Questions twinkle like stars in your quest divine, Two timelines apart, your words brilliantly shine.

Emotions speak in a mystical frame, Crafting a world unique through your poetic claim.

In the divine script, destinies unfold, A love story written, mysteries yet untold.

For the one I loved, beyond my sphere, Yet in dreams, our connection crystal clear. A plea etched in the canvas of the sky, Your poetic heart whispers a gentle sigh. YUJIIIII, your pen dances with grace, A celestial quest, a timeless embrace. In the symphony of words, a tale unfolds, Your verses paint a story, beautifully told.

😮‍💨

You made me think poetic

For real this is one of my fav poems of yours

I had to give some poetic, mysterious feedback for you

@primal hornet

bwahahahaahaha

[bleak loom]

Woah this is magnificent.

[fallow hazel]

Had to use my lil brain to full potential to write a feedback which can compliment the wonderful poem fr

[bleak loom]

NOT LIL

Seeing both of your works and resonating with it, I feel so inspired. Thank you @primal hornet and @fallow hazel

[fallow hazel]

I am glad ma'am we as poets gotta inspire eachother...

💫

[primal hornet]

@fallow hazel noona really rn I'm speechless 😭 tbh I don't have words to praise you 😭

[bleak loom]

Indeed.

noona?

[fallow hazel]

💀 it's not that good hahaha it's just i was impressed

Really really

[fallow hazel]

We met here on this server and gradually became like internet siblings

He my brother and i am his sister

[bleak loom]

||its not good, its best.||

Ohhhh

[fallow hazel]

😭

Thank u

[bleak loom]

so he is like a younger brother i assume

since he called you noona

haha

[primal hornet]

@bleak loom nd broo why are you saying that, you are even better than me?😭

[bleak loom]

NO

OMG NO

you are 1000 times more imaginative than me

i literally admire it

[primal hornet]

@fallow hazel noona u r the besttt ✨🌙

[fallow hazel]

Yea hehe 🙃 he is 2 years younger than me

[fallow hazel]

🤠😎

[bleak loom]

i see

[primal hornet]

thank you @fallow hazel noona nd @bleak loom sis

[bleak loom]

You're wellcome.

[teal sandal]

Wonderful! @bleak loom has just pregressed to level 3!

[fallow hazel]

✌️

[calm swan]

Oh my god the astronomical imagery in the poem is incredible!!!

It's honestly wild how many poems I've seen in this server with similiar theming to ones I've written.

I can completely relate the feeling of holding an affection for somebody you want to reach out toward but you feel as if they don't know you so you don't know how to

[primal hornet]

@calm swan Thank you broo for taking the precious time to read my poem.... ✨🌙

[empty hornet]

*@nouhs8 Thank you

broo for taking the precious

time to read my poem.... ✨🌙*

- yujifushiguro.

[calm swan]

Because my poem #1199207572524253204 was also about feeling as if you hold something with somebody who in reality, you're only watching from a far, and it also uses space metaphors

Yours intertwines the celestial theming perfectly though

I absolutely love "i will inscribe your name in the canvas of my sky, you might be the one for whom i can cry"

[primal hornet]

This is very beautiful✨ writing a poem for someone you don't know... I feel we are alike brooo 👍

[primal hornet]

I will definitely read your poem👍

[calm swan]

Joining this server has honestly just shown me how universal some feelings I feel as if nobody else relates to can be.

[tribal dagger]

wow man im amazed reading this like it just a story of a person lovinf a moon we could admire and love with all we have still we cant be at same page in life damm bro love it❤️

[primal hornet]

@calm swan i can relate to you..... 👍

[calm swan]

Thanks, let me know what you think when you read it, but it is kinda a long read lol

[primal hornet]

@tribal daggerbroo I'm glad that you liked my poem 😭

@calm swan It's good that it's long......as a beautiful poem should be, so it never comes to an end..... ryt brother???

[calm swan]

Mhm.

[tribal dagger]

I really don't know how to describe it brother.
But it feels the author is trying to convey from the very core.

A kind of immortal dialogue between his soul and her spirit maybe her unwillingness to love, maybe betrayal.
I've read it thrice, and everytime, I've comprehended it differently.

You did great. Going to check out your all submissions. ❤️

[teal sandal]

Wonderful! @tribal dagger has just pregressed to level 1!

[tribal dagger]

True 💯
Can't agree more. I guess that's what supposed to make us human, the supposed emotional beings.

[primal hornet]

@tribal dagger I may not know much......I just try....!!Praise should be for poets like you who invest their precious time in reading my poems.... thank you brother 😭