I can win against The Weather
As hard as it can, the wind could blow
I’ll fight back at it better.
My medal beating the sunshine’s glow.
Im the only one who can drown me.
In the heat of the battle, I land a sharp stroke.
I don’t flake, it’s the snow I’m bounding.
It’s done for The Weather, I took off my cloak.
#Sunshine Glory
pallid quartz
river sequoia
hm
pallid quartz
"im the only one who can drown me" damnn v empowering poem
river sequoia
i feel like the similes that u are trying to do are not really correlating with each tother? where does medal come from and a sunshin'e sglow?
latent tiger
needs better contexts in some parts but its decent
pallid quartz
i feel like the similes that u are trying to do are not really correlating with ...
when u win a sport u get a medal
like the olympics
nd sunshines glow cuz of like a sunny day
i dunno i think it was strictly fighting + weather analofies
river sequoia
ah i see.. well
i mean i understand that but you might want to keep your analogies more together
pallid quartz
i mean i understand that but you might want to keep your analogies more together
wdym?
river sequoia
like if you're talking about the wind and weather adding in medal seems a bit out of place
it's like if im writing a song about how much i hate someone and i was mentioning a few thems about wanting them to die in a car crash right, putting in someone about food would be odd... even if there is a connection in some way. maybe instead of medal you could have something else related to fighting that isn't necessarily a medal. but i mean this is just how i see it, whatever floats your boat