Forever may exist or maybe not,
But when you say you love me
It makes me wish more it never did,
Cause I know our story has an end,
And you my love
If I knew were to be with someone forever,
Someone that's not me
Would make me wish the word 'forever'
Never did exist.
#forever
granite quarry
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terse ocean
>>> Forever may exist or maybe not,
But when you say you love me
It makes me wis...
such clashing emotion 🤌
rustic fog
In retrospect, I would not consider this a good piece in the literary movement pertaining to poetry. In my opinion, the potential is undermined by scarce techniques and simple language. This is a good, simple poem, yet it does not dig its claws into the world of meaning. The words used are not enough to put the particular above the arts, it fails to transcend where poetry makes meaning.
granite quarry
In retrospect, I would not consider this a good piece in the literary movement p...
I hear you, this is definitely one of my most basic piece, especially as it doesn’t make much use of any poetic devices, but thank you so much for the feedback
terse ocean
In retrospect, I would not consider this a good piece in the literary movement p...
me reading this review while descending spacetime 🗿
granite quarry
me reading this review while descending spacetime 🗿
haha but thank you so much for your words as well !!