Something I'm scared of. | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

fossil dawn Jan 23, 2024, 5:44 AM

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god! this is so good

earnest fable Jan 23, 2024, 5:44 AM

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Thanks

unique nexus Jan 23, 2024, 5:47 AM

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I also think it's good, only thing is the fact that there are only quotation marks on 'then why would you be scared of it'. It would maybe be nicer if the first verse also had quotation marks so that it looks like the rest of the poem is your answer to someone. (Idk if this helps at all)

earnest fable Jan 23, 2024, 5:48 AM

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It does, but I was too lazy to correct the grammar in this so...

unique nexus Jan 23, 2024, 5:48 AM

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Oh sorry

earnest fable Jan 23, 2024, 5:48 AM

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np

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thanks for feedback

unique nexus Jan 23, 2024, 5:49 AM

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You're welcome even if it wasn't very useful lol

lyric steepleBOT Jan 23, 2024, 5:49 AM

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unique nexus You're welcome even if it wasn't very useful lol

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#Something I'm scared of.