Need second set of eyes on poem. | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

molten onyx Jan 18, 2024, 3:36 AM

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I need some help in getting feedback on this poem I’ve written. I tried a new format with it this time and wish to see what I can improve before I share it officially. I would prefer to share it via DMS to those who can help me, all help is appreciated.

I will say general TW for gore metaphors and darker themes.

worldly pumice Jan 18, 2024, 5:35 AM

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I wan

molten onyx Jan 18, 2024, 5:41 AM

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worldly pumice I wan

I’ll send it in DMs.

worldly pumice Jan 18, 2024, 5:42 AM

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Sliding into my dms??

#Need second set of eyes on poem.