the sun moon and stars.

[balmy harbor]

I usually know what to say but I dont🧍🏾‍♀️ help

[balmy harbor]

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[polar oasis]

I feel like it merits another stanza

You talk about the moon, so the mind looks for the sun

[balmy harbor]

Yeah agreed

The only issue is idk what else to say in it

[polar oasis]

The moon gets it's glow from sunlight

maybe you could make something from that

[balmy harbor]

Yeahh

[balmy harbor]

@balmy harbor how focused do you want it to be on the moon stars and sun? what response do these things elicit within you. there's certainly an untouchable grandeur of these objects, save for the moon, that carries authority

[balmy harbor]

It doesn't have to be 100% focused on all 3 I wanted to add in galaxies and stuff also

so your horizons are wide

not only as far as the moon, but the distant puddles of planets that ripple beyond our mind

you have expression here, gathered in your hands. throw away the brushes and paint how you feel.

[balmy harbor]

Yeah

[balmy harbor]

I definitely will!

as far as your content provided, it touches close to home for my appreciation of such things. how the clouds offer themselves bare, spread across the vast sky, serenading yes, dancing and twirling, spinning and still. murky pillows hanging above or pale and billowing, constantly gliding on the dance floor of her beholder.
the sun and the moon, waltzing. oh a perpetual motion, spinning around us, hands held together. ones gaze brings life to the other, showing indeed that there was nothing ashamed to uncover.
The moons glowing mounds and valleys, do speak of a love that is around the corner.
Indeed a tranquil sight, the moons silver beams do send us soundly to sleep.
dive into each element of your thought which you believe you already painted, there are more images to sprout.
organizing and cleaning up the chaos of creativity is what presents such a product.

[balmy harbor]

YESSSS

Ahh is it alright if I use some of the things you said in my own words?

You are concerned to ask . it's no worry. I was here to help guide, and if it's a pen borrowed from my cup, then go on. I don't want you stagnant, but to grow

Okayyy

personally I know I have skills to work on, as I'm a bit new as well to it all. Though the drive is what matters

[balmy harbor]

Thanks! I usually ask because people sometimes don't like when people use things they've said

[balmy harbor]

Sameee even though I've been writing for almost a year

[balmy harbor]

you get that essence of expression. desire to share, burgeoning in your chest and it came to spill out. of course you're here. A year, so many stories. I'm sure to learn as much from you as well.