Thursday’s Revelation | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

rough terrace Jan 9, 2024, 3:42 PM

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I'm asking for feedback

fresh helm Jan 9, 2024, 3:44 PM

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Dude keep this in off topic or something

rough terrace Jan 9, 2024, 3:44 PM

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Okay lmk

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Oka

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Okay

river coveBOT Jan 9, 2024, 3:46 PM

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rough terrace Okay

Wonderful! @rough terrace has just pregressed to level 6!

rough terrace Jan 9, 2024, 3:50 PM

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Yes, in the beginning stanza I'm talking in present tense as it's supposed to be in a "story-like" manner. I shift towards past tense to recount events

river coveBOT Jan 9, 2024, 3:54 PM

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Wonderful! @frosty barn has just pregressed to level 2!

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