"I whip you because I love you. If I didn't love you, I wouldn't whip you." | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 4:34 AM

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"I whip you because I love you. If I didn't love you, I wouldn't whip you."

modest stone Jan 3, 2024, 4:54 AM

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" Isn't pain love's prize? " OUCH.

idle sluice Jan 3, 2024, 5:02 AM

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the last line hits so hard

wary oriole Jan 3, 2024, 5:11 AM

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Great poem

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I loved the line, a paradox, cold

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Your rhythm and rhymes are nice in this

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 5:18 AM

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thank you!

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 7:02 AM

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@cinder cedar

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@toxic void

cinder cedar Jan 3, 2024, 7:06 AM

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i got a lot of inspiration from this just now

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 7:07 AM

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gald i could help

toxic void Jan 3, 2024, 7:07 AM

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Stanza 2 is the best of what I’ve read from your work stanza 3 sounds kinda off to me idk why

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 7:07 AM

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its a convo thats how ur suppose it read it

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thanks for reading!

rough yacht Jan 3, 2024, 7:59 AM

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this is such a beautifully sad poem

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 8:04 AM

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thanks was an emotional write but we gonna get through it 💯

rough yacht Jan 3, 2024, 8:05 AM

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all u can do, is push through

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 8:05 AM

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yup

signal karma Jan 3, 2024, 9:25 PM

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This is REAL 😮‍💨👏🏾

signal karma Jan 3, 2024, 9:26 PM

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haughty haven thanks was an emotional write but we gonna get through it 💯

Ur brave Dani, something to be proud of 🙏🏾

coarse copperBOT Jan 3, 2024, 9:26 PM

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signal karma Ur brave Dani, something to be proud of 🙏🏾

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haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 9:27 PM

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thankss

rain folio Jan 3, 2024, 9:38 PM

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i read illustration as illusion by mistake and i was moved suddenly woah wow
what do you think

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 9:39 PM

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ill keep illustration since the next lines talk about painting

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thanks tho! heart

rain folio Jan 3, 2024, 9:42 PM

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i posted my comment and then realised that the poem is continuing still and illusion doesn't make sense with the rest🤡

haughty haven Jan 3, 2024, 9:42 PM

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no ur good!

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and the speaker in the poem wouldn't see her bruises as illusions. she truly believes if someone is abusing you its out of love so it wouldn't be seen as "a false idea or belief"

rain folio Jan 3, 2024, 9:52 PM

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which makes this poem so realistic
this poem portrays your message really well 👏

#"I whip you because I love you. If I didn't love you, I wouldn't whip you."