My Beloved | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

molten lake Jan 2, 2024, 6:58 AM

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Your poem needs more appreciation ✨

strange snow Jan 2, 2024, 7:03 AM

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Berry good! This poem reminds me a lot of 19th century poetry with its rhyme scheme and all. It's exceptional at painting a picture, and I like the last stanza the best. You packed a punch with this.

tidal basin Jan 2, 2024, 7:03 AM

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thank you so much!

main musk Jan 2, 2024, 7:43 AM

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beryy noice poem it seems lmao..

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great work

split osprey Jan 2, 2024, 7:46 AM

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waiting for love 😕

tidal basin Jan 2, 2024, 7:47 AM

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yes waiting for love but not sure how much longer I can wait

thorn plinth Jan 2, 2024, 10:27 PM

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An absolutely wonderful poem! Definitely seems like a mournful love poem. To me, it seems like the narrator is in love with someone who may not necessarily notice them but has either accidentally or purposely helped them through a tough time.
It's a very emotional and well done poem, I commend you!

deft sentinel Jan 2, 2024, 10:27 PM

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I love the 2nd to last stanza and the last line, hilighting things completely opposite and yet holding the same effect - trouble in the mind. I also like the line "by your presence in my mind," and the rhythm fits well as well as highlighting the downsides to love. unfortunately relatable but incredibly well-written

tidal basin Jan 2, 2024, 10:31 PM

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thorn plinth An absolutely wonderful poem! Definitely seems like a mournful love poem. To me,...

its more about waiting for the right person to come along but not sure how long you'll be able to wait

gloomy glacier Jan 2, 2024, 10:31 PM

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tidal basin its more about waiting for the right person to come along but not sure how long ...

I feel that so much

tidal basin Jan 2, 2024, 10:32 PM

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but i love even people interpret my work in different ways!

green remnantBOT Jan 2, 2024, 10:32 PM

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*but i love even

people interpret my work

in different ways!*

willow heath Jan 3, 2024, 5:09 AM

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Genuinely such a beautiful poem — I’ve been in an emotional mood all night, and this just about moved me to tears. Just wow. You should be so proud; I wish I could write love poems (I suppose it’s equal parts love poem as it painfully sad) this beautiful 😭🤝

tidal basin Jan 3, 2024, 5:10 AM

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coming from u this means a lot love ur work!

tidal basin Jan 3, 2024, 7:02 AM

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@manic orchid

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@cold sorrel

manic orchid Jan 3, 2024, 7:04 AM

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I relate to that more than i can put into words.

manic orchid Jan 3, 2024, 7:04 AM

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tidal basin its more about waiting for the right person to come along but not sure how long ...

especially that message

tidal basin Jan 3, 2024, 7:04 AM

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yea its a feeling few understand

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and im sorry you do

cold sorrel Jan 3, 2024, 7:04 AM

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The punctuation is throwing me off

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Stanza 6 is especially good

tidal basin Jan 3, 2024, 7:05 AM

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its freeverse punctuation is placed for a reason

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