chest full of shards

[barren kettle]

Who is anyone but a fragment,
A vessel missing some parts,
Yet the vessel hasnt gone stagnant,
Even with its missing arts,
Why i ask to the void,
Is there no solenoid,
To halt its painful path,
Consuming all of my dreams,
I seem to scream "why hath-,
tore upon my seems?"
But i gain no thought,
Of its need or ought,
So i will continue to wander,
These faithful hills,
With a heart asunder,
Among the daffodils,
Why does the sun gaze upon me,
When the void is all i seem to see.

[novel current]

I really like it

[barren kettle]

thanks :D

[novel current]

Ynow it beautifully captures existential questioning and I really like the metaphors used

[barren kettle]

i do alot of that questioning lol