Troubled Marriage (One Sided)

[wary spoke]

the final line seems a bit odd? However i love the honesty and blunt nature of the poem/letter and their emotional, acknowledgement?, of their shortcomings and missteps. Not that im the best for advice, but id say its a really interesting piece with probably just some changes in language id do differently.

[empty spoke]

Yeah I’ll get better over time and adjust it

For now I’m just spitballing