#Fiery.

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grim vigil
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A quenching emperor stands bleak -
Spear of family to a mountain's peak,
As snow pales the leader's cold cheek.

Amid the harsh undead view,
Lay a triumphing army's red hue,
marching to a standpoint's blue,
Their bloodthirst had really grew.

But the troopers remain unfazed;
this is how their mothers raised -
for no tears even when blazed;
they never ever came praised.

The legionary entered hearts,
sharp in the middle - no darts,
leaving organs to miniscule parts -
the art of war were their smarts.

The dead perched o' so glad,
fuming smoke in the air so mad -
grinding their canines very unclad,
the remorse was only so much-so tad.

ashen egret
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I love that it gives such detail and imagery while using simple rhymes! Good job!

marble mural
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ill read when imhome im pullin in en

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right now

grim vigil
marble mural
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AAAA

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commendable

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i was gonna say the last stanza is my fav but then i was gonan say the 2nd one bt then the 4th then the 1st then the third so like

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its really really good

grim vigil
grim vigil
# marble mural AAAA

I want for Renoir to eventually get to create feedback on this, I wonder what he'd think of this 🥲

grim vigil
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Fiery.