poem about sylvia plath

[vapid tundra]

Uhm
Poetry
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Sylvia plath in her poppy fields
The warmth the fire the hell it was
The warmth the comfort she chose did she not?

All in the box that she had shook
The bees screamed for her ears to bleed
The bees the bees that she had bought

Plath the woman ever in sadness
The creeping comfort it had brought

To be happy was scary to be happy was a lie
To be sad was the way of life ever present

Wow guys that was epic please like and subscribe

[vapid tundra]

poem about sylvia plath

[vapid tundra]

@indigo tide
Seriously
Be nice im new i never write poetry lmao

@forest dragon

[indigo tide]

No problem evenyone starts some where

It's a wonderful poem.. that talks about how the many choices in life are take away from us and no matter how hard we try we are unable to crawl out of that pit which we got stuck in

A very introspective poem

[vapid tundra]

Really…? Thank youuu
You’re too kind < 3

[indigo tide]

Just a suggestion- next time try to use the synonyms of the words

[indigo tide]

Awww... thanks

Keep up the good work

[vapid tundra]

Thank youu

[indigo tide]

@vapid tundra would you mind giving feedback to one of my poems?

[rustic hazel]

*@nacreouslynx

would you mind giving feedback

to one of my poems?*

- lyra3149

[indigo tide]

Thank you @rustic hazel

[visual hazel]

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[forest dragon]

@split arrow

Thanks again 🙏🏼

[vapid tundra]

Id love to
Tag me pleeez!

[visual hazel]

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[vapid tundra]

Oh sugar i forgot to comment on this lolol
I love that interpretation of it
(Its not what I originally interpret it as when i wrote it but that just makes me even happier we can get different messages from it heehee)

[split arrow]

this is such a nice message

last stanza is absolutely fire

I love it

it still play in my mind

to be...., to be...., to be....
haha!

gj!