#HermanDev Poem mini-book
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Purpose Without Higher Purpose
I was delighted
when I realized
Loving you was pointless
This poem?
Yeah like is this a letter or something? If not, then it's okay as is
I feel like this matches the energy of the first poem in the file
It's good to go
I enjoy all of your poems. I paused to ponder on some @chilly vault
Ty
Is it like a dedication to someone?
No, just wanted to make a few poetry books for the holidays
*No, just wanted to
make a few poetry books
for the holidays*
Will give them to friends maybe, and put them in little free libraries
Oh, sure, that sounds wonderful! I thought you were going to publish them so I was thinking too much about it. Sorry if I came out strange.
Ah no worries. I might publish it eventually, though I feel I've got a little work to do
Ideally it'd be longer, and I'd improve the quality a bit- make the collection work together better (poem ordering, more complete explorations of themes)
Okay. If you write short poetry, consider haiku, senryū and three-line poems.
That sounds great