#3 A.M. Cravings [Blue]

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fallen lotus
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There is a feeling of desire
that one feels
when you get bested by your sweet tooth.

When all you crave
is a hot plate of pancakes.

Just the right amount of warm
that feels like a warm blanket in winter.
They look so soft
that you can almost feel them melt on your tongue
before you even start eating.

Its colours remind me
of a teddy bear's tummy.

No matter if you like
syrup or butter on yours,
the amount of serotonin I get
when the shimmering liquid slowly trickles down the side
and paints the plate is

immeasurable.

When I pierce it with a fork
I can feel
how soft
how chewy
and how light
it is going to be.

As it nears my mouth
I smell its light sweet smell.
a symphony of milk, eggs, and flour
lead by the sugar that
I hear my blood cry out for
I can feel my mouth water.

It is almost in my mouth now
about to dissolve my desire when

I have thought

||I want a pizza.||

smoky summit
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now my stomach is growling

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and my mouth is watering

fallen lotus
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mission accomplished

smoky summit
mental herald
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The poem of the century

rustic sparrow
# fallen lotus There is a feeling of desire that one feels when you get bested by your sweet to...

The plot twists of being indecisive was fr relatable 😭 I love your work - I feel like drooling while reading your poem xd
Getting inspired by food is such a wonderful idea 💐
The poetic form you used, the placement, you pair it with challenging verse - smart move by using , then multiple adjectives and nouns hits different.
You have a good sense of writing! It made your poem stand out, when the actions (verbs) with a combo of describing words.

Well done with that would love to read more of your work!

My favorite part when you cliffhanger everyone haha COFFEEEow heart

fallen lotus
dawn shuttle
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I love this so much it was such a fun read. rlly felt it and omg the plot twist BAHAHA ♡

grand needle
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M Night Shyamalan level twist right there