#A Poisoned Dove

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gray isle
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I’d rather be in your imagination.
For I grow cold when you become my creation.
I’ll never know if your eyes can truly see.
But I’d like to believe that they can fall in love with me.

For every time this happens, I go cold
I wrap myself in a blanket and fold,
Thinking is it love or a poisoned dove.
I wonder if tonight will be my last day,
Mom, Dad I'm here just say "Hey".

rich meadow
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This!

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This is so baller!!

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I’m am puzzled on what you mean by the first two lines..

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But I have theories… but I’m not sure if I’m right about them..,

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Care to share what you mean?

gray isle
# rich meadow Care to share what you mean?

yeah, sure .... So it's like the poet is basically trying to place itself as a spirit in someone's' head trying to get into and posses them, saying that the poet would rather be in the persons imagination as if he tries to posses the person, he will only experience nightmares.... Basically to survive the lost spirit needs a lost soul. The spirit is portrayed by the poet and is trying to warn the person as he wants to live but doesn't want to harm a soul.... Hope this helps

rich meadow
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It doesn’t

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Like, idk what that even means…

rich meadow
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How is that harming a soul?

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If they are?..

gray isle
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they harming the soul by possessing it and not letting them self control themselves

rich meadow
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Hm

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Yeh.

rich meadow
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And I’m sure that definitely includes human relations

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Because people do be treating their partners like they own their soul

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Low key and high key

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People be abusive