#A Cry ~Km

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little plinth
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||Hello||

I didn't invite you in
So why are you here?

||I need your help||

Get away from me
I don't want you near

||I'm sorry... Am I being too loud?||

You're pounding

||Just listen||

Stop pounding
And just get out

||But-||

This is my brain
Not your house

||I know-||

Go

||Wait!||

Pack your things

||Why won't you just listen to me?||

My head isn't a place for you

||I know, but-||

Just leave

||If you won't listen to me I'll make you||

Stop pounding on my head
Like it's a door

||Just listen to me! Or I'll pound some more||

Cut it out!
I don't want you here anymore

||Pound||

Stop it

||Pound||

Stop it

||POUND||

STOP!

||Please...||

Go.

||I just wanted to know...||

Pack your things.

||What made you so cold?||

Or I'll make you leave me be.

||I needed your help, but I guess I'll just go||

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I suggest to read it without the ||black out|| parts first then read it with both parts

rich pine
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This is an interesting piece it's good but interesting

heavy kettle
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@little plinth you're a genius

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I love this.

little plinth
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I started the poem with only the non blacked out words then decided to add more

heavy kettle
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Oh lol

little plinth
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@gentle plover

gentle plover
gentle plover
little plinth
peak obsidian
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Brilliant poem. I've experienced this with someone before.

royal tokenBOT
viscid tendon
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This is amazing, I love the separate povs and the repetition.

neat marlinBOT
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*This is amazing,

I love the separate povs and

the repetition.*