#Hate the entirety? Or the sinner?

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proud spade
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Oh my dear? Have you sinned?
I looked at the letters, you must have feared.
Though you've sinned? An Angel? You?
Against who?

Oh you've sinned against the devil!
Or so you thought.
Thy heaven is at stake! Will you pay?
Oh the devil has laughed with a delightful smile!

Will you really be charged for the price?

Oh dear! Your face is splattered with red paint!
That must be your scenario, when your future is at the line.
Though God must be comforting you, with fine lines;
Scattered across the papers, and the letters of the devils lies.

Oh my dear angel! Will you pay the price?
The devil has told you, "Your future, will be dictated like a roll on a dice."
Though I'm not sure if the others dislike you for your sin.
The entirety of it,
or just the sinner?

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@tiny bear @muted vale as you see, its a bit different from my usual style. tried something within my reach/genre but changed it up abit

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@narrow crater

narrow crater
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Long aaaa

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Okay 2 mins

rocky violet
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its cool but i personally dont understand it that well

austere hinge
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The topic of sin and repentance is legendary and ought to be discussed. Thanks for sharing. Consider also thinking about Enlightenment vs Illusion. The writing was good. Thanks for sharing

proud spade
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thank u so much

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for reading

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THANKU MAN

proud spade
austere hinge
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All you brother

proud spade
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it is pretty hartd to understand

narrow crater
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Love it

proud spade
narrow crater
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Lmao I'm gonna attempt narrating

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Lmfao

foggy swan
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i am trying to understand it but i think i have like half a brain cell
but my interpretation of it is something like this-
a person, a pure soul, an angel who has never sinned
committed one and only one
the devil is happy about it how the angel who committed to only one sin will be confined to the boundaries of hell under the devil
here people can have 2 interpretations of the angel
crazy people - a pure soul commits one sin they label the whole person at fault and hate the angel
sane ones- will hate the sin, and try and forgive the angel

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@proud spade ? is my understanding of it correct ?

proud spade
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this poem was made for peoples understanding seperately

sudden reefBOT
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*this poem was made

for peoples understanding

seperately*

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proud spade
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so it actually depends on the person

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how they interpet it

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though the real understanding (main) is and will be kept only for my brain heh

narrow crater
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Why the hell was this so hard to narrate smh

proud spade
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its your choice

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hehe

narrow crater
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Lmao

proud spade
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HEY NOT BAD

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U PORTRAYED GOOD EMOTION WHILE SAYING THE POEM

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KUDOS

narrow crater
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tyy

muted vale
proud spade
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DIE

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NO WONDER UR A DAZAI STAN

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UR LEGIT A MACKAREL BRO

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STUPID TAKAYAN

muted vale
proud spade
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bluniam

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muted vale
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Bluniam

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