#Nyx - EYE Burn

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mystic junco
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Absence of noise,
no other sounds other than
my clicky keyboard and mouse
and my breathing

110 words per minute
isn't that impressive?
Sure, my eyes are glued to the screen
too focused on the words that
I don't realize how loud this keyboard is
BUT
110 wpm is..

not even that impressive.

Eyes squinted, click clack-ing from my keyboard
(red switches by the way)
Faint yellow outlines the words
The urge to stop ensues
Vision becoming desiccated;
Eyes becoming bleary

God I feel like throwing up.

lyric totem
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This is my reminder to chuck my device away and have some brooding time. Beautiful verse and beautiful message.

mystic junco
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Poems for parents to use against their children- Prt. 1.
Nah, jokes aside..
I like the spacing with "not even that impressive" to give it a "dramatic" effect. =]

mystic junco
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THANK YOU ALL BTW !! <3

bronze violet
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I like this poem. It somehow gives me a sense of the point of view of a perfectionist. Pushing yourself just to satisfy yourself. Familiar feeling, haha

mystic junco
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I love this! I like your writing style, it feels kinda relatable. I love this so much. Like the feeling of trying so hard that risk of health occurs, but still being a dissapointment...

frank phoenix
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Do not get motionsickness, alright, dear lady. Lovely poem, apart from the feeling of wanting to throw up.

mystic junco
granite horizonBOT
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*no promises! i

still get those headaches to

this day lol 😭*

- Nyx ❗❗