#A Box of Me

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real coral
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Hello all! This is my first time writing poetry since 5th grade, so 7 years ago.

I was tasked by my teacher to write a reflective essay answering "Who am I?", and I wanted to take a different approach.

I don't even know if this can be considered poetry since it's rather lengthy, almost like a short story, but I haven't had this much fun writing in a long time.

I hope you enjoy reading and any criticism would be greatly appreciated as I want to start doing this more 🙏

jaunty parrot
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YOU ARE A WONDERFUL BOX!!!!!!!

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I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA!

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OH MY GOD THIS IS SO UGHHHHHH ❤️

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cant even describe how im feeling rn after i read that

real coral
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i was a little anxious since this was my first time in a while but im so glad you enjoyed it :D

jaunty parrot
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PLEASE dude I AM BEGGING more poems!!!!! FEED US!!

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its really good man

real coral
jaunty parrot
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also your songs sound really good, sounds like an osu map

real coral
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oh you checked that too ? hHAHAHAHA