carrie - tin man

[vapid sandal]

I love the format of this 😭🫶 and the way you bring the words together, simply beautiful. Well done!🌻

[red magnet]

fr this format is amazing. also wonderful vocabulary!

[shy fog]

Exciting format really! Not random matching the story! All I get from this. Is win, whoever the writer is winning right now

[red magnet]

random but i loved the “ripped purity”

really just lovely poem. makes me wanna touch on betrayal tbh as i haven’t written a poem about it

[lyric citrus]

yeah, I wanted the vibe of like being forced to grow up too fast

[red magnet]

you conveyed it lovely 🐸

[lyric citrus]

if yall want to, starring it would also help

[red magnet]

starring it? 👀

mmmm im slow 😭

[lyric citrus]

like the star reaction can put it on the starboard

[red magnet]

yeh gotchu 👍

[lyric citrus]

@red magnet @winter gorge @distant anvil yall were great yesterday, got anymore feedback left in yall?

[distant anvil]

OH MY GOD

[brisk pier]

Wonderful! @distant anvil has just pregressed to level 6!

[distant anvil]

ITS SO GOOD.

HOW DID YOU WRITE THIS IN ONE DAY 😭😭✊

I just keep reading this over and over this is so good 😭😭😭

I’m like honored that this was vaguely inspired by me

[distant anvil]

Okay I’m back to describe better what I like about this poem so much: 1. the last line 😍 such a comedic ending which I love 2. THE FORMATTING OH MY GOSH IT LOOKS SO GOOD 3. the whole metaphor behind the tin man from the wizard wizard of oz is actually such a cool idea and I wish I had thought of it first so actually I hate the poem 😡🤬

Jk, obvi

BUT THE THEMES ARE SO GOOD AND THE VISUALS AND OMG LIKE THE ICE TRAY LINE AHH

[lyric citrus]

THANK YOU SO MUCH UR SO NICE AGHHHHUUUUHHHH also the formatting was so fun istg you have got me so excited to do more stuff like this cause my formatting is usually boring as hell and i have like one poem with fun format but im actually really hyped so thank youuuuuuu

[red magnet]

EWW NO

[red magnet]

IKR?!