Nyx - Cold | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

sour crown Nov 28, 2023, 1:39 PM

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starving
hunger
desperation

eyes flickering - wide open
pain settling in
my patience running thin

in - out
noises - silence
love - hatred

door left open
snow rushing in
cold breeze
fitting my face

yours remained
still is
warm

                         eyes closed
                         acceptance settling in
                         i feel *cold.*

sacred inlet Nov 28, 2023, 1:42 PM

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May I know the reason for line breaks and enjambements

sour crown Nov 28, 2023, 1:44 PM

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sacred inlet May I know the reason for line breaks and enjambements

i honestly didnt think much abt it hshsh just thought it gave an oomph to the poem

barren robin Nov 28, 2023, 1:52 PM

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For some reason this reminds me of anxiety/anger issues

sacred inlet Nov 28, 2023, 1:56 PM

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That's great because I got a feeling of disheveled confusion (something misplaced/someone misplaced) which perfectly fits the theme here (if I am not wrong)

sour crown Nov 28, 2023, 5:04 PM

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I like this, it giving me vibes when I freeze on ski 😋

#Nyx - Cold