Ode to Becoming / A Late Spring (AHH) | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

stark yarrow Nov 26, 2023, 10:47 PM

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Constructive criticism and feedback would be much appreciated 😍🤞

lusty hamlet Nov 26, 2023, 11:08 PM

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Love the typography

stark yarrow Nov 26, 2023, 11:42 PM

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@delicate vapor

delicate vapor Nov 26, 2023, 11:47 PM

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this was certifably AWESOME 🐝 The typography and editing, and all the wonderful creativity put into one mesh of work is supremely cool. I thoroughly enjoyed the use of your flavorful imagery and sensory quips within... Thank you for sharing this

stark yarrow Nov 26, 2023, 11:57 PM

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Omg youre so kind

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Thank you 😭

valid chasm Nov 27, 2023, 1:40 AM

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Bruuuhhhh the typography with this?! I'm obsessed. the b's in different shades did it for me

glacial marlin Nov 28, 2023, 4:34 AM

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I love the religious imagery as always. And the flowers make me happy.
Sprinkled mythology then ending with mythology

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That line two halves (one Italy and Constantinople)
A history nerd?

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I love your work so so so much

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And I need your typography and killer font

stark yarrow Nov 28, 2023, 4:36 AM

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glacial marlin That line two halves (one Italy and Constantinople) A history nerd?

Oh very

glacial marlin Nov 28, 2023, 4:36 AM

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My spirit aahhhhhh

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Love that fading b b by overlapping

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You are playing fun games with typography

stark yarrow Nov 28, 2023, 4:37 AM

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Typography >>>>>

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Well playing with typography

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I love it

glacial marlin Nov 28, 2023, 4:38 AM

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Me too although I am pretty new to it

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It is so much fun

stark yarrow Nov 28, 2023, 4:39 AM

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Yeah definitely

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I mostly just do tabs though

glacial marlin Nov 28, 2023, 4:44 AM

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Tabs are goated

stark yarrow Nov 29, 2023, 12:09 AM

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Ode to Becoming / A Late Spring (AHHHHHHHHHH)

stark yarrow Dec 11, 2023, 12:34 AM

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Ode to Becoming / A Late Spring (AHH)

silent swan Dec 16, 2023, 1:29 AM

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I can't express it in words

broken roost Dec 17, 2023, 5:40 AM

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I'll see this asap

stark yarrow Dec 27, 2023, 8:26 PM

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@tiny wren

tiny wren Dec 27, 2023, 8:31 PM

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Wow! This is beautiful. I love how you separated yourself while speaking of being whole. The structure is very clever.

broken roost Dec 30, 2023, 6:29 PM

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Woah

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Good work

uneven moth Mar 1, 2024, 4:23 AM

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Right off the bat, really interesting formatting

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I don't think I can truly grasp all the biblical allusions but it truly is rich writing, I will have to really sink into this to grasp it

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I enjoy how the beginning is kinda commentary on one truly changing to somebody unrecognizable and foreign to their past self

stark yarrow Mar 8, 2024, 3:40 PM

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@empty wedge

empty wedge Mar 12, 2024, 5:18 AM

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Quite an intriguing piece, I'm not too familiar with typography but as far as I can see, the idea of mixing mythology, modernity and mid age events was really incredible, some of the words are grey to me but like the mythology things but I can relate them with other texts to make sense of them which is a plus point of your poem, I like the metaphors and imageries the poem places on the table, I would suggest to not jump central topic out of the blue but rather a fade type transition, like don't do it rapidly but slowly and steadily, other than that, I don't see any other improbable things, a 9/10 would be appropriate.

weary fulcrum Mar 19, 2024, 1:34 AM

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wow. the writing in this is amazing! i love the greek mythology references as well, and the way your formatted it is both cool and beautiful in my opinion. i have no criticism! good job!! you're an excellent writer.

#Ode to Becoming / A Late Spring (AHH)