#Paranormal

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long night
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An old soul,
in a young body,
subjugated to mazes,
memory that erases,
walking with tied shoe laces,
who falls like toddlers,
with waves of doppler farther away,
I have no say like a ticking time bomb,
staring at wires wrapped around myself,
with scissors in my mouth ready to cut them all.

I fly like a pterodactyl,
prehistoric,
but raiding like Vikings in the Nordics,
where Valhalla will bow down to me,
and where the bodies will pile to pyramids,
crawling on each other, just zombies,
reaching out to take me from the top.

I'm not scared,
I'll extend my hand,
and capture eyes so I can see,
and mouths so I can eat,
where bodies will become vessels for exoskeletons of my ship.

It's price that's elastic,
but this soul,
just plastic.

wheat trellis
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🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Those last lines really sealed the deal here, lovely

long night
tropic shoal
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that reminded me a lot of things...

"staring at wires wrapped around myself,
with scissors in my mouth ready to cut them all." this part reminded me an effort to save yourself with speaking up yet you are so lost in thoughts and maybe the thoughts are suffocating you and you want to get to rid of them by screaming out loud.

"reaching out to take me from the top." suffering from success perhaps?
or maybe losing control of power and turning toxic WHO KNOWS not me lmao

If I said smth wrong Im so sorry,, really sleepy rn but one of the indicators of a good poem/saying is to see the affect on sleepy/drunk people sooo yea ^^

long night
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Good take on it though

long night
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I’ll go over deeper analysis from it if your free though 😂