ella - revised

[empty wigeon]

Your words strike of vigorous displeasure —
Our love, intoxicated; your sinful endeavor.
My fervent desire: to be your only —
On my knees — like you are all that is holy.

Swearing on your mother —
A shadow behind your frame.
We will never be the same,
Carrying the weight of a lover.

Bright cerise, deceitful locks —
The lies on your lips, so cold;
Losing your innocence to another —
Broken promises of old.

[potent jackal]

a lot on surface it shows, but more it hold in the depths

nice work @empty wigeon

[empty wigeon]

thank you so much

[cerulean spear]

this is so good what

[empty wigeon]

really?

[cerulean spear]

yess

[empty wigeon]

thank you

[cerulean spear]

ur welcome

[proper echo]

On my knees — like you are all that is holy." I love this line... overall poem makes me think of an unfaithfull lover. And fervent is such a cool word it makes my brain happy.

[empty wigeon]

thank you cin