#Space

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eternal blade
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Space

My dear fellow, I must confess,
You've caused me pain and deep distress,
By breaking trust we once possessed,
Leaving my heart in a huge mess.

You hold a special place in my heart,
That has been left void ,
Void and vacant for you to turn,
You left me to wallow in my hurt,
You took my emotions and toyed.

But still, I want to find a way,
To not forget you yet, and start anew,
To mend the bond that's gone astray,
And rebuild trust between me and you.

The world left me be battered,
But nothing else mattered,
As long as a star to chase,
Nothing else to matter in space

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lapis axle
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You write such good and relatable poems, while reading i was connecting my soul to my situation and everything with this one poem of yours it made me feel like there is someone who exactly knows what that period of a relationship felt like. The 3rd stanza took me by surprise since i was asking the server to help me with the same matter.

charred bridge
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This was an amazing poem!

lapis axle
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And sorry for the late reply since i was busy with some personal problems

eternal blade
eternal blade
cerulean yacht
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Seems good and very real