#Punisher
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The last line feels like a fragment (who are you to spite what?); how can skin peel away someone else? Anyway, the image of the crimson embracing the other person's body was super cool and I liked this 🙂
do you suggest maybe adding another line?
Yes! Lmk if you want ideas
okay its fine i wanna come up with stuff on my own
good because I don't have any ideas
really? thank you
Yes, I won't sugercoat. Honesty exists rarely yet you can find in my comments.
thank you i think it turned out really well.
i used to be inscure about showing people my work but im glad it's getting some feedback
Swagg mannn!