#The land of the rising sun

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glass ledge
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Over my head,
The red scorching sun,
Which on my face,
Has left its mark.

Distant land,
Which I was raised to adore.
Not once have I bathed in its water,
Not once has my step touched the soil.

Yet on me, I bear their skin,
The silky raven hair,
Almond eyes which to the sky point,
As if trying to reach for their mother, the sun.

In their faces, my image is reflected.
On the inside, our alliances differ.
I'm the fragments of their before,
In a place so far from "their" home.

I possess their names and surnames,
But in my language, they're spoken.
I was, I am, I will always be part
Of that land I know not of.

steel mica
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Great poem you have there.

It just doesn't rhyme.

glass ledge
torpid dragon
glass ledge
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I’ll take that as a compliment

torpid dragon
# glass ledge I’ll take that as a compliment

I was sharing the thoughts that came to my mind as I read the poem haha
But yes! I liked your poem ^^

Sorry if any part of my message wasn't a response you expected.. 😅
I feel the age part? lol

glass ledge
torpid dragon