Dark

[cunning mirage]

Blind in front of the fakeness,
Accepting the false brightness,
All around the poisonous vines,
But in the dark clouds, I try to shine.

A twisted sense of trust,
But that is lighter than dust,
Your biggest immortal foe,
Hiding around but still on show.

Snakes inside the field of flowers,
Black and Grey killing your power,
The true colours start to show,
But then then true reality , you know.

Left behind,
Tossed behind,
Broke and left the mark,
Pushed into the dark.

• The Angles

[gusty compass]

Wonderful! @cunning mirage has just pregressed to level 1!

[cunning mirage]

Not really by best work but had to write it for my emotions.....

[severe dew]

It seems like you went for an approach of deception, I really enjoy your uniqueness of trying to explore the poem, merely with words as bright, blindness, and shine, all to do with 'light levels'.

[cunning mirage]

Thank you...my usual writing style is to hide the true meaning behind words...but here I poured out my emotions raw without filter....... Well yes I tried to be shown as unique here but also that ppl view that uniqueness as a alien thing...and how it leaves u different from the world by u being unique but an alien in the crowd just there to be decieved and betrayed by ppl.......

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[severe dew]

Interesting, I like it, do you always write with a darkish and gloomy tint?

[cunning mirage]

Sometimes....kinda depends on mood as well...my poems can be dark or rly cheerful....

[cunning mirage]

But nowadays i m venturing more to try to show a little thougtful things by a bit dark concep...but yeah i also enjoy writing romance,happy kinda poems as well......

[gusty compass]

Wonderful! @cunning mirage has just pregressed to level 2!

[severe dew]

More like in accompany of a mood-swing?

[severe dew]

Which one would you like to work on the most?

[cunning mirage]

Yeah.. ! Feeling the mood while writng makes me more connected to it....

[cunning mirage]

As I said depends on mood....but I have been told by some that Dark poems are kinda my thing.....though I try to write more happier and cheerful ones than my dark ones....

[severe dew]

Intriguing, any how why it might suit your writing better?

[cunning mirage]

For Dark poems words just come naturally for me...that dark,visious , gloomy side to show is there.....whereas for cheerful ones i need to feel that immense emotion...Also in most of my poems I like to keep them dark by leading into somewhere light......

[severe dew]

Presumably because if mishaps in a distant childhood; where darkness tended to break through creeks of the night? While emotional responses were compressed and building up, untill your alleviation of writing broke the silent build-up?

[cunning mirage]

Hmmm....its more like my inner imagination for my hidden dark side that peaks from the creeks while writing....

[severe dew]

Hmm not something to do with life experiences?

[cunning mirage]

Not really i'll say.....but yeah it is the frustration and sadness from reality itching that inner being to something kinda dark.....

[severe dew]

Well, it is really interesting approach! Keep writing and thou shalt fine!