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west canyon
daring shale
I enjoyed this one a lot! It felt playful in a well but also melacholic, which i think lent the personal air a bit. I'd be curious about exploring more of what I see in the graphic perhaps? I almost think just one scene from 'somewhere' spicy might play in the poem's favor for me? But to the same extent, I think it may hurt the relatability for some. That graphic is just so cool though!
west canyon
I tried to tie it in with the green thumb part, but yeah I see what you mean. The graphic is from a cave I found in no man's sky. The green lights in the cave reminded me of Plato's allegory
But thank you so much for reading me!
daring shale
I tried to tie it in with the green thumb part, but yeah I see what you mean. Th...
ahh NMS!! that's so cool - hmnn maybe the story could evoke the cave a bit? I think it's great as is ofc! I love that allegory ❤️ it's a beautiful piece!
west canyon
Yep I definitely could theme it towards the graphic and Plato for sure I'll be reworking this one and let you read it when I get it right