My ambition

[peak pilot]

You put a blanket,

On my fire;

For darkness I will let,

To take over my desire.

But the blanket, I'll burn,

And my fire will kill the darkness;

For now you will learn,

My ambition is greater than my carcass.

[austere temple]

last line seems a bit forced

up until that point, awesome

but the carcass with a darkness is a loose, and not very good rhyme

[peak pilot]

Last line has an alternate line too

[cosmic karma]

*but the carcass with

a darkness is a loose, and

not very good rhyme*

- .bob2811

[austere temple]

show me

[peak pilot]

"My ambition, I shall harness"

There were 2 options

I chose carcass for smth new

[rapid dune]

Yoke anything

And see it pull you to and fro

Just as the push and pull of the Moon

On waters of Earth

[peak pilot]

Those are beautiful lines sodo

Where tf is haiku bot now

[rapid dune]

Your words inspired me

So you da best

[peak pilot]

Do you mind if I write a poem on those words

[rapid dune]

Don't let me stop you from creating

Do what you want

[peak pilot]

The push n pull of moon on water

Ty