Deathbed

[mental thistle]

I discovered my deathbed today
Warm and clean sheets
Layered with thick, cozy blue blankets
White pillows as soft as clouds
A teddy bear to comfort me through my darkest nightmares

I'm tired, this world has wore me out
I'm freezing, this world has done me cold

The bed welcomes me with open arms
As the breeze rips me of my strength to resist
So I drown myself in thick, cozy blue blankets, As I put myself to rest

In hopes that in my dreams I can paint a much warmer world
And in hopes my Teddy Bear will rid me of my nightmares

[mental thistle]

i love the idea, could have been executed in a better way imo add more details and format it better

[mental thistle]

It's supposed to be simple yk. A very heavy and dark concept explained lightly is the effect I wanted to portray

But thx bro

aight

check out the version i wrote?

Yea, really liked it

ure is simpler imo

Yea…i tend to go for short and sweet. Because my mind is very complex, and I think very deeply. When I express it to the world, I do it subtlety if that makes sense