#ive been thinking about killing the fish

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heady silo
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Love. Love. Love.

stoic meadow
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Two fish, yin and yang

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Almost like half your soul is missing

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Which is what the fish represents to me

bleak schooner
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haunting and beautifully dreadful

brisk portal
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God damn Robin, that's one beautiful poem. It's perfectly conveying regret and contemplation, the consequences of one's actions and how much u try to understand life and death.

And the last lines, the last lines I say! It's my fav ngl, out of all the sophistry those few lines seem to stand out the most to me. I love the poem, but poem aside, are you doing good? I'm always here to lend my shoulder.

sick nexus
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Im alright, this isnt one of my sad poems hehe, im glad to hear you liked it <33

brisk portal
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I'm surprised, small details even in this one? I need to really pay attention to your next poems now

sick nexus
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Biggest thing is just how OFTEN i write words that are opposites

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And it all starts after i say “i want to fracture reality”

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Heres it visually demonstrated in my handwritten version of this poem

brisk portal
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You do diary and journaling too?

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God damn

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Thought I would be the only one these days

sick nexus
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Not well, i just want a collection of my favourites handwritten

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I call it The Bottom Drawer

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Any pages i mess up i turn decorative

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Theres one for this piece hold on

brisk portal
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And your good at drawing

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God damn i

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The stuff I write down is usually the first draft of my poems

olive moatBOT
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*The stuff I write down

is usually the first

draft of my poems*

- a_k_u_m_a_.
brisk portal
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And study related

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If I'm at school I can't use my phone so I make my poems on that

olive moatBOT
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*If I'm at school I

can't use my phone so I make

my poems on that*

- a_k_u_m_a_.
brisk portal
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Then write it down on my notes app on phone and work more on it digitally

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Like there are parts I need to try to make rhyme and parts I need other words

sick nexus
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Drew my pfp too

sick nexus
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Im a little at awe that you can write any poetry on paper i need the versatility and comfort of digital

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Easy changing quicker pace

brisk portal
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Excuse bad quality and bad handwriting

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Hence marked as I and II

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This how most of em are made, I'm happy to know there's others like me tho

sick nexus
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Holy

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Your handwriting is beautiful

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I feel so embarrassed now

brisk portal
sick nexus
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I swear ive impreoved since those screenshots

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You want the full image? Lol

brisk portal
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Sure sure

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Also we should continue in off topic or dms

sick nexus
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Oh yeah

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Poem

brisk portal
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Too many mssgs blocking out ur beautiful poem