...ده بلبل باغچه ده ميني

[golden plover]

The nightingales song,
Is what I want to hear,
In its garden of love,
I forget all I fear.

[willow crystal]

What’s the title?

[golden plover]

it means "In the nightingale's garden of love"

i originally wrote it in Pashto and then translated it into english

[willow crystal]

Gotcha lol. Nice poem btw

[golden plover]

...ده بلبل باغچه ده مينيه

[sage nova]

This is superb. I love it and i love i how i feel reading it!

[grizzled thicket]

*This is superb. I

love it and i love i how

i feel reading it!*

- carbonlibra

[golden plover]

thanks. I wonder what you think the meaning is?

[golden plover]

thanks, i appreciate it

For you as well, what do you think is the meaning

[willow crystal]

Wanting to be comfortable in your own skin or wanting to be in a healthy relationship I can’t decide but either is to not be alone wishing the worst?

[golden plover]

interesting! I love the interpretation!

[sage nova]

perhaps the song is a message from a lover (the nightingale) or a distraction from all the worry and anxiety of life.

[golden plover]

...ده بلبل باغچه ده ميني

[golden plover]

yesss!

I love your interpretation as well

i like to add mysticism in my poems, which means they have some religious elements added, but I obviously make them a little vague so there are different non-religious interpretations

[sage nova]

so you were hinting at heaven?

[golden plover]

no, I was hinting towards my love of God. But heaven is absolutely an acceptable interpretation! What I mean with the 'nightingales song', is like a pleasant/comfortable feeling, some kind of reassurance. It's a very spiritual concept, but the "garden of love" is like my spiritual connection with God. When I'm in this garden of love I feel pleasant and reassured. It's kinda difficult to explain as I tried translating this poem as idiomatically as possible

it's a sufist poem

[willow crystal]

Okay see at first I was thinking it was romantic but the more I thought I was getting this. Truthfully if there is a god, I’d say they exist in us some way or another; Spirituality can give us the courage and strength to face our darkest days.

[golden plover]

exactly, i couldn't have worded it better