#Lover

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drifting slate
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To be in love,
To be loved?

I feel like I’m walking down the darkened streets at night,
Wearing nothing but a pair of sunglasses.
I’m vulnerable and blind,
I feel so wrong but I don’t know what’s right.

If I take a wrong turn,
I won’t feel any different because I’ve been lost since the beginning.
I don’t know what I’m doing but I feel a warm hand guiding my way,
I feel lost but only in the sense that I don’t want to be led astray.

Even in my state of vulnerability I still feel safe,
With his hands around my heart and his eyes pulling me in.

I thought I’d been in love,
But nothing has ever felt so warm.

Words,
They used to feel so empty but I feel each pulse of every sentence he speaks.

I’m walking through a maze with cloth over my eyes.
Every turn I take,
I know it’ll be wrong.
Dead ends and hopelessness await every move I make.

I hear his voice and I follow it through,
“I don’t feel so lost when I’m lost with you”
We don’t know where we’re going and with each turn is a surprise.
I’ve never liked surprises but with him I will try.

In the darkness of the night,
I tread in unknown waters.

To be in love?
I feel so stupid because I’m young.

To be loved?
He’s brought the moon back into my night sky and he’s the sunrise in my morning.

I am in love,
I am loved,
For him I would die.

subtle coyote
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To be lost in the arms of a lover, what more can this life offer. Im happy that you feel safe enough to let him guide the way even knowing he doesnt know where to sway... I really liked the poem. Let him see this would mean the world to him probably. I love the ending as well, there is doubt (?) or being surprized to be loved and then instead of pushing that unknown feeling you accept it.

Even in my state of vulnerability I still feel safe,
With his hands around my heart and his eyes pulling me in. and this part is really nice as well ^^

drifting slate
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Thank you 😁

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I worked for about 2 hours on this poem

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which seems extra now that I say it

subtle coyote
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damn but its worth it

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its a pretty cool piece

drifting slate
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I really appreciate it 🙇

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I write too many love poems/songs that aren't super genuine so putting my actual feelings into a poem like that is wierd, to say the least

subtle coyote
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I think poems shouldnt be forced yk the most appealing things I wrote comes from the times when my feelings are gunine cuz you need to relate to the things you write and the best way to relate to a situation is to be in it

drifting slate
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I agree completely

subtle coyote
drifting slate
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sometimes I write based on things that I've seen or have felt before but not necessarily in the moment. I like to add feeling and emotion into everything I write but sometimes it isn't something that I, myself have experienced first hand

drifting slate
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I do sing them to myself, though

subtle coyote
drifting slate
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yeah, maybe

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I've never really worked with anyone else when writing or doing music so it would be a new experience

subtle coyote
drifting slate
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That's very true

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I'm open to the idea

subtle coyote
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timezones are a bi*ch that might be an issue

drifting slate
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What time is it for you?

subtle coyote