Young lady, dewy skin;
Lust bears love within.
Shall we sin, darling..?
-2nd try
Dewy young lady;
Will you be my meant to be?
Love... sin of lust, us.
#(Ctb) = The body of love =
shell belfry
(Ctb) = The body of love =
thin warren
Damn this is dark I love it
timid aurora
maiden oyster
check this #1171598112561823784
shell belfry
does the second sentence gramatically makes sense
maiden oyster
its short like urs
shell belfry
I wasnt sure when I was writing it
tawny bronze
it was good but the second line didn't quite connect
great job in this one stanza
Easily understood!!
Easily understood!!
shell belfry
it was good but the second line didn't quite connect
yee I felt that I wanted to go with "contains" instead of bears but then it would be more than 7 wovel
tawny ingot
Young lady, dewy skin;
Lust bears love within.
Shall we sin, darling..?
-2nd tr...
hi! great work! the only problem is, a haiku usually has only 5 syllables in the first sentence, 7 in the 2nd and 5 in the 3rd. it isnt really complying with that.
young lady, dewy
skin; lust bears love within. now,
shall we sin, darling...?
this would be a version that complies with a traditional haiku format ^^
shell belfry
hi! great work! the only problem is, a haiku usually has only 5 syllables in the...
so wovel count and syllables are different things... got it
tawny ingot
yes they are!!!