still the same advice as last time! the formatting is the only issue.
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south latch
also, since its free verse, it may be harder to convey your emotion or make the poem- BE GOOD. so maybe try experimenting with poems that rhyme, and have a 4 line formatting.
i dont know if it's just me, but restrictions make me even more creative.
heady minnow
Honestly I don’t think you really gotta worry about your format or even rhyming or anything. To me it’s a good poem that’s very personal, I’d say if you wanted to you could dig a bit deeper on the imagery.
south latch
right, but I think it would be more effective and/or easier to do a traditional poem ❤️ (again, maybe it's just me)
half glacierBOT
right, but I think it would be more effective and/or easier to do a traditional ...
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