#Tis Awe?

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burnt eagle
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God, how lovely she is.
Each time I wonder if there's any more to her;
Each time I dwell into new realms of her.
The way her eyes mesmerize me,
How delicately enticing.
Her scent enchants me;
Feels as though I'm in heaven.
I'm enamored by the beauty of her voice;
How harmonious and dulcet.
So melodious that I could listen to it endlessly.
Her captivating charm, seduces me,
And I lose myself.
Not once have I found
Someone so unique,
Someone so unparalleled.
Her presence solely is a blessing;
Exceptional in every way,
Is she an angel or am I just deeply in love?
How could she be so divine?
What makes her truly a masterpiece?
God, how grateful I am.

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@shadow torrent @dense lion @steep inlet @fiery granite @teal lodge coolshakespeare

shadow torrent
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This is probably the best time for me to read this cause i had a dream that makes this so interesting

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But outside of that, this is really pretty and relatable and for me, pretty nostalgic

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I like the self awareness of is she an angel or am i just deeply in love

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Good stuff!! Your stuff always wakes my heart up

burnt eagle
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Ahh thank you so much !!

winged sonnet
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It's a beautiful poem. The definition of admiration.

proven flowerBOT
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*It's a beautiful

poem. The definition

of admiration.*

- writer_moin
dense lion
burnt eagle
burnt eagle
tardy portal
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I don’t know if I’m way off or not but this whole thing reads sarcastically.nIts hard to really pinpoint a specific technique or line or word choice to demonstrate that but its just the vibe I got reading it. If I were to attempt to demonstrate it Id chose “God, how lovely she is”; not once have I found / someone unique” and “God, how grateful I am” where their seems to be a wink to the reader or a hyperbole befitting sarcasm. I would claim the punctuation fits a sarcasm interpretation. One thing I would draw attention to regardless of this hypothesis is the surrender of power word chose her eyes “mesmerise me” her scent “enchants me” “I’m enamoured” by her voice. And the subject is later called “divine” - I maintain a belief that its a sarcasm in which case its very well done

burnt eagle
dense lion
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Women ☕

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Wonderful Poem

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I am at a loss of words for all poetry after reading Apology of Socrates

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It feels my emotions cannot be put into words anymore recently

burnt eagle
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LMAO 😭

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Thank you for reading !!

dense lion
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❤️

dense lion
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^narration

burnt eagle
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ah you killed it val

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thank you so much

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that's really beautiful

dense lion
# burnt eagle ah you killed it val

np! just care to tag me if it's cool when you can! I miss stuff ez ; ) thank you for letting me be a part of this! I LOVE your work and its variety but you nailed this thematic I feel ❤️

dense lion
dense lion
steep inlet
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i have actually read this many times but didnt get around to responding but the way it is written is very elegant ❤️

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it feels like a love poem which is very to the core of love poems
if that makes sense..!