Ghost ( Haiku ) | By: Kurt | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

solid helmBOT Oct 31, 2023, 4:46 PM

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*I'm lost, I'm a ghost

Invisible, forgotten,

Wishing I was seen.*

sterile seal Oct 31, 2023, 5:12 PM

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i would prefer it if the first line didn't directly say that you were a ghost

celest badger Oct 31, 2023, 5:13 PM

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I love all haikus tbh and yours is pretty nice

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Sorry for the Terrible feedback

sterile seal Oct 31, 2023, 5:13 PM

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its hard to give feedback to haikus

sterile seal Oct 31, 2023, 5:13 PM

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this is a haiku btw

celest badger Oct 31, 2023, 5:13 PM

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I agree bc they are so short. But that’s what I love about them

tribal heathBOT Oct 31, 2023, 5:13 PM

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Wonderful! @celest badger has just pregressed to level 11!

solid helmBOT Oct 31, 2023, 5:13 PM

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*I agree bc

they are so short. But that’s what

I love about them*

#Ghost ( Haiku ) | By: Kurt