#Strenuous love

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tawdry shuttle
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The hearts might palpitate through marrow and bone,
Renascent for thy lover,
Redolent of the sweet mint might linger,
The precipitous decision for thee lover,
Redound to the repletion,

Credulous thought often good in nature,
Lead to strenuous feelings of longing, moreover,
The lover, mostly of minor importance,

Oh, mine lover, thou art the remunerate of my monotonous soul,
Mine soul enriched by thy flavour,
The gazing of prosperity and harmony straggling in thee spirit
Stars above propel yonder, through mist and dust,
Like mine heart moves through pain and lust,

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@midnight moon as requested. @river flare I revised it partly.

<@&1144090752457113794> and <@&1145760802666717234> always welcome

river flare
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Why u use these words

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In simple language I'm dumb

tawdry shuttle
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@silk valley I love to know your thoughts as well.

silk valley
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What

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Who summoned me

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Oh-

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Yea 1 sec mate

gritty yarrow
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Future writer here, I’ll be your biggest fan dont worry 😭

river flare
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literally post more, i love this poem sm

tawdry shuttle
midnight moon
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I love the usage of words in this poem, the way you use old traditional words for poetry like thy, thee, thou are impressive. This provokes many feelings in me. I love this poem. Nice work Alien. ❤️‍🔥

tawdry shuttle
midnight moon
river flare
river flare
river flare
tawdry shuttle
tired galeBOT
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*Of course you can my

friend, I appreciate your

enthusiasm!*

tawdry shuttle
river flare
# tawdry shuttle Not sure, you might know something that might be off.

Hmnn beyond that, what target demo do you want and what type of collection are you shooting for perhaps? The accessibility is rough on this one but the art itself is good - so it's a push pull. I love that! But food for thought. Behind in feedback a bit still? But still down to swap! I can workshop this sometime (and I loved this piece <3).

cold owl
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based

tawdry shuttle
cold owl
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just based

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i like it

tawdry shuttle
red quest
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This poem reminded about emporer palpatine

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Taking over anakin's head

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Having fear of ones own decisions

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It leads to anger

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And hate

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And those fish in that poem

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The one already dead

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Is proof you need to keep the other half

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Alive

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Make sense?

tawdry shuttle
red quest
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Balance of good and bad, never of evil.

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That's a life equation for you.

tawdry shuttle
red quest
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(Sodo)

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Read whichever topic

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❤️

midnight moon
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Glad your poem is being a hit! Hats off Alien!

tawdry shuttle
neat vault
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Very well done, Kelvin

river flare
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I find this one nice!