Outside, it's spring | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

trim pilot Oct 30, 2023, 9:25 PM

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Outside, it's spring,
But I don't hear the birds sing,
I want to scream,
But I feel like in a dream.

I cannot reach the flowers,
I feel like in an empty world,
With no humanity, or love,
I want to wake up,
but in this dream I'm twirled.

I don't hear the birds sing,
even though the flowers have bloomed,
The sky is telling me it's spring,
But I can only think we're doomed.

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ivory shale Oct 30, 2023, 10:30 PM

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i love how this poem makes an image in my mind that really felt like "im in a dream" its like i am in the situation where i am confused if the world is even real or not. i like the concept overall.

trim pilot Oct 31, 2023, 9:32 AM

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ivory shale i love how this poem makes an image in my mind that really felt like "im in a dr...

thanks

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what do you think the singing of the birds symbolizes?

ivory shale Oct 31, 2023, 9:35 AM

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the beauty of the outside world

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and also the bird singing outside as well

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i forgot which word is it

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freedom i think

trim pilot Oct 31, 2023, 9:36 AM

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yeahh so what do you think the overall meaning is of the poem

modest crystalBOT Oct 31, 2023, 9:36 AM

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*yeahh so what do you

think the overall meaning

is of the poem*

ivory shale Oct 31, 2023, 9:37 AM

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i think its the emptiness of a wonderful world

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outside its spring, nothing else is within the spring except for emptiness

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wait lemme think another term

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i think its the outside that is wonderful, then what's inside is not the same

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"I don't hear the birds sing
even though the flowers have bloomed
the sky is telling me its spring
but i can only think we're dooned"

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i knew there is a hidden meaning 😭😭 (you're smart for this)

trim pilot Oct 31, 2023, 9:40 AM

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yess i like your interpretation

ivory shale Oct 31, 2023, 9:40 AM

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thanks

trim pilot Oct 31, 2023, 9:40 AM

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ivory shale i knew there is a hidden meaning 😭😭 (you're smart for this)

thanks lol, I was just asking just to see if my message was somewhat clear

ivory shale Oct 31, 2023, 9:40 AM

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i see

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there's like other understanding in the poem but it will end up with the same message

trim pilot Oct 31, 2023, 9:42 AM

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yap, really, any interpretation is acceptable

ivory shale Oct 31, 2023, 9:42 AM

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different perspective, same meaning/message

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i really liked this poem, its just beautiful

trim pilot Oct 31, 2023, 9:42 AM

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thank you!!

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:42 PM

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@sinful condor @azure agate

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:43 PM

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Spring mentioned

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:43 PM

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yesss

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:43 PM

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Oh wow

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This is quite a horror poem

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Went from birds singing to wanting to scream

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I’m scared

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:43 PM

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yea

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:43 PM

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https://tenor.com/view/cat-scared-gif-6787764075896120076

Tenor

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:43 PM

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its not a love poem

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:43 PM

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I’m getting from this that you’re in a state of hopelessness

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:44 PM

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somewhat

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:44 PM

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“I don’t hear the birds sing”
“I want to wake up”
All of this implies a state where you’re frozen physically and you’re left stranded with you and your brain

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:44 PM

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yess!!

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thats exactly what i meant

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:45 PM

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I got that right?

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Woohoooo

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That happens to me all the time it’s the worst

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:45 PM

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and what do you think the birds and the flowers symbolize?

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:45 PM

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No because it happened to me when I was on a date with a guy

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:45 PM

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trim pilot and what do you think the birds and the flowers symbolize?

Hmmmm

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I want to say a girl but you said it isn’t a love poem

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Give me a minute

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:46 PM

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its not that specific

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its a rather broad thing

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:46 PM

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I thought they represented your senses

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Losing the ability to grab the flowers is losing your touch

azure agate Nov 12, 2023, 11:46 PM

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i should probably post a poem

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too

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:46 PM

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Losing the ability to hear the birds is the loss of hearing

azure agate Nov 12, 2023, 11:46 PM

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im writing one rn cuz its midnight bruh good time yk

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:47 PM

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i actually love the interpretation

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and rlly any interpretation works

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but what i meant with the birds and flowers is a sort of 'hope' if you know what i mean

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:48 PM

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One thing I will mention is that the world is fading

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The beautiful things in the worlds are chirping birds and flowers

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When they cease to exist, the world droughts in its once-had beauty

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:48 PM

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yes the pleasantries and enjoyment of life

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exactly!!

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:48 PM

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WOOHOO

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:48 PM

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they represent the enjoyment and pleasantry

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like

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outside its so beautiful and spring, but i cannot enjoy it

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is the meaning

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sorta

sinful condor Nov 12, 2023, 11:49 PM

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Tzu cookinggg

trim pilot Nov 12, 2023, 11:49 PM

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i cannot get pleasure from the beauty and happiness

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bc im stuck in my overthinking and whatever you make from it

azure agate Nov 12, 2023, 11:49 PM

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trim pilot i cannot get pleasure from the beauty and happiness

check dms

#Outside, it's spring